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Post Icon Posted: Aug 25th, 2006 at 01:51 am Quote Post

Varley990, RedStar a.k.a Sammy the Scarlett Harlot.

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It was one of those arguments where the nabighbors listened in. But this was the couple that never fought, the newly weds. They were new to our naborhood and rumor had it they were both in the music industry. I rember hearing something about the husban being a producer and I think my daughter said his sister was a model.

Well I could apologize but it might be too late for that.

This time you could define it as more than just a lover's spat.


We all heard her scream at him top go to hell and as soon as he was gone my wife and her friends ran over to ,in her words "Comfort the Poor Dear."

So I'll drink and think about what you told me I could do.

But after I go to hell, can I come on home to you?


However I'd been in that young mans shoes once do I figured I knew where he was headed and there was one just down the road.

I pulled in to the parking lot of The Viper Loung, the naborhood bar. I saw that young mans car and knew he was in there. I got out of my truck and walked in tothe bar. I saw him sitting alone at a table in the back with a beer bottle. I got a drink fom the bar and walked over to his table. I sat down next to him with out asking. He gave me a look and went back to peeling the lable on his bottle.

"Son" I said to him,"We all hear ur argumant do you want to tell me whet happened. He looked at me and for a moment I thought he was going to tell me to go to hell. But instead he said..

I knew that other woman was as poison as they come.

But she flashed that sexy smile at me,

And like a man I acted dumb.

Though she offered me her body, I swear,

I could not go through.


I gave him my advice I said "Buy some roses, go home, and tell ask her..

So after I go to hell, can I come on home to you?

Is there something I can say,

Are there any feelings left inside?

Could we just rewind the time,

Before we say goodbye?

All I can say is I hope he took me adivce.

Kwest walked up the front steps and knocked on the door in his hands were 12 red roses, 11 were real but the center rose was fake. He waited, going over what he was gonna say. When Sadie answred the door, her eyes red from crying he said to her...

I guess there is no explanation that you ain't already heard.

So I'll be headin' down to Hades' to heed your every word.

And I'll walk barefoot on the brimstone,

Just to prove I can be true.

But after I go to hell, can I come on home to you?

Hey, then after I go to hell, can I come on home to you?

As he spoked she started to cry again. He startado cry as he tried to explain" Sadie, I didn't cheat on you. She was a friend of my cousin. NOTHING more, Please belive me I love you!" Sadie took the roses and his hand. As she led him inside she noticed one of the roses was fake. Sadie went to put them in water as Kwest leaned on the kicthen cabnet. Sadie took the note and began to read it but Kwest took it from her and read it to her.

"I'll love you till the last one is dead."

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Post Icon Posted: Aug 25th, 2006 at 11:33 am Quote Post

I like it Red. Good Job.

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Post Icon Posted: Oct 9th, 2006 at 06:08 pm Quote Post

awe I really like it. awesome job!! ^_^
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Post Icon Posted: Oct 10th, 2006 at 08:00 am Quote Post

aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww! So cute!
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